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Global warming is a process which was actually necessary as it tends to keep the earth warm and comfortable for humans to live in. As the sun projects its radiation towards earth, the light passes through the atmosphere and some is radiated back into space in the form of infra red. The rest of the infra red is trapped by the atmosphere which keeps the earth warm at an appropriate temperature. However, as the atmosphere thickens with the help of green house gases, more of the infra red is trapped inside making earth warmer and warmer. Thus, we must identify the potential effects of global warming towards climate change and handled it immediately.
Global warming creates impact on the strength and occurrence of hurricanes and storms. Ocean temperature that increases intensifies the power of hurricane to a deadly nature disaster. Japan and United States have recorded a large number of death reports due to hurricane events. According to the Inconvenient Truth (2007), Al-Gore stated “As the water temperature increases, the wind velocity increases and the moisture content increases, making the hurricane stronger and stronger resulting to devastating effect”. Easy said, global warming had cause the ocean temperature boost up as well. At the same time, the rise in ocean temperature has disturbed the climate in term of occurrence of hurricanes.
Global warming also means more precipitation of water that come in a onetime storm. Evaporation of ocean moisture up and form clouds. Flood cases have been shown all around the world such as China and India. Plus, the warming does not only increase precipitation, it relocates the precipitation as well. High latitudes area and generally wet places will be favor of more rainfall, while tropical regions and generally dry places will receive less rain. Warming result in evaporation of ocean that makes more clouds but, it also sucks moisture from the soil making drought. On some predictions, climate change flooding could make around 100-200 million people permanently homeless by 2100 (Woodford, 2006).
Global warming is also affecting the seasons. The warm temperature has shift the growing season in many parts of the globe. Spring is coming earlier, which signals the migrating animals to keep up with the seasons to follow food sources. Those animals that failed to keep up ended up facing extinction. Warmer temperature has also result an extend towards growing season, plants need more water to keep growing or they will dry out, increasing the risk of fires. Shorter winters have failed to kill insects and vectors. More and more infectious diseases are no longer under control due to the unexpected pattern of the seasons. Research made in the Inconvenient Truth (2007) mentioned that “we had 30 so called new diseases that have emerged just in the last quarter century”
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Good Effort! To improve, please consider the following.
The introduction shows that global warming is a positive process, but the thesis statement shows that there are negative effects. So, it is contradictory. Since most of the sources show the negative impacts of global warming,and the rest of the essay discusses the negaive impacts, your introduction should reflect this. So, please change it. You can see me on Tuesday to get some additional support.
Check the citation: write the surname and the year without a comma. For the movie, write the name of the film and the year instead of the name of the main character.
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