The effects of television viewing draft 1
Television has become a necessity for people nowadays. It is estimated that more than ninety per cent of households in developed countries have at least one television set (Modern Child Development 1999). Based on the American Time Use Survey (2003), the US population spends most of their time watching television rather than participating in sports, socializing, playing games or computer and other leisure activities. The ability to portray actions, educational ideas, latest information and a lot more has become the main factor why television is so hard to resist. However, this particular habit of watching too much television provides its own consequences.
Firstly, watching television continuously is believe to affect the development of children thinking process. Children are likely to form ideas of life and behaviour as portrayed by the programs they watch (Sharif 1999). There have been cases where children imitate the stunt that their idol made inside the television and injured themselves. Plus, it can lead to the development of poor behaviour when children follow their favourite actor unpleasant attitude after watching a particular movie. Moreover, the experts on child development criticize television programs that allowed violence to be premiered. Research has shown that children who watch violent programs continually become desentised to violence (Sharif 1999). Indirectly, the children may think that violence is common in life and is a main option to solving problems.
Other than that, watching television continuously may risk people to several fatal diseases. It takes very little effort to press the button and turn the television off, yet for some it means gathering every ounce of will power to do so (Rutherford 2002). This has lead to more people to switch channel and search for something interesting to watch rather than doing their homework and exercise. In addition, some families are used to watching television and having their meals at the same time. According to Rutherford (2002), it is a sedentary activity and, when indulged in with snacks, can cause obesity and related diseases. Prolonged period in front of the television mean that the children are not being physically active (Sharif 1999).
Too much of television are also proven to stunt the academic growth of students. From the time television was invented it has fascinated its audience both young and old (Leigh 2001). According to Leigh (2001) again, Dr Geraldine Jones, an educational psychologist, is convinced that children who are heavy viewers are among the lowest achievers at school. She describe that watching television is a passive activity, these children do not develop skills which are crucial in creating problem solving and organisational ability. Referring to Leigh (2001), Dr Thomas Alexander mentioned that television programs are designed to demand undivided attention. When television is on, it is very difficult for student especially to concentrate on homework.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the disadvantage of watching television surpass its benefits. Health, academic performance, and the children’s way of thinking can be extremely affected by only continuous watching of television. Television may provide unlimited information but without limit, there is “high price” to bear.
2 Comments:
Wohoo.. its me again lol..
So like usual, nice intro. There are statistics provided plus well-written thesis statement. For the body paragraph, all are well elaborated with good supporting details.
Maybe you can consider some of these things. These are just my opinion. Woots..
1. ”Other than that, watching television continuously may risk people to several fatal diseases”. Maybe you can change ‘several fatal diseases’ with other sentence such as ‘serious health problem’
2. “This has lead to more people to switch channel and search for something interesting to watch rather than doing their homework and exercise”. The word ‘homework’ also appears in 4th paragraph. So im not sure whether u trying to said either it is refer to ‘house chores’ or ‘school homework’. If it is ‘school homework’, it seems like a repeating. Maybe u can just simply cut it. If it is ‘house chores’, maybe u can change the word to make it clear.
Good conclusion and overall it is nice essay dude. :D
thank you for your comment bro..
i'll consider it right away..
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