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Monday, April 19, 2010

**Junk food argumentative essay**

The public has recently become more aware of the negative consequences that junk foods bring. Parents fear had force this issue to be debated whether junk food should or should not be banned at schools. The term ‘junk food’ refers to food that contains low nutritional value includes takeaway foods, pre-packaged meals and sugary snack foods (Tran 2005). The nutritional value of food eaten by Australian children has been dropping continuously over the past 3 decades (Weekend News 2005). I strongly stressed that junk food should be banned in school for several reasons.

Junk food can be said unhealthy or of low in nutritional content. Most junk food is made by adding chemical additives to improve their flavor and colour. The additives also function to increase its vitality. However, these substances have been proven to cause behavioral problems in children such as hyperactivity. They are also said to have caused various diseases to children. Products such as instant noodles, potato chips and chocolate bars raise the kilojoule intake and lead to weight gain (Weekend News 2005).

Junk food packaging is also a major problem towards society. Litter is a safety and health hazard, increasing cleaning cost, and is bad for the image of our communities (Family Journal 2005). School teachers also reported that there was a major difference when they banned the selling of junk foods at their school. The school workers do not have to spend so much time cleaning and has more time for other maintenance plans that benefit the school. In this way, the school can spend the money to other profiting sector.

There are also reports saying that junk food had cause problems toward the educational basis. According to the The Food Show (2005), teachers noted significant improvement in students’ behaviour in class when junk food and soft drinks are removed from the school canteen. Plus, students are noticed to be calmer after lunch when not consuming junk food. Poor eating habits of children can induce unhealthy growth and reduce their learning potential as junk foods often consist of chemical enhancers which can induce behavioural problems (The Food Show 2005).

As the conclusion, I strongly believe that the banning of junk foods is the best solution. They provide a better future for the students. Plus, based on the reasons above, junk foods clearly bring more negative impact either it is directly or indirectly towards people. The world can be a better place just by this small step. Stop consuming junk foods.

7 Comments:

Blogger Sam July 09e said...

please get your peer to comment on the essay!!!!

May 9, 2010 at 10:47 PM  
Blogger si kosong aka muhd zombie said...

Halo3…
Overall the essay is well-elaborated with good supporting details. The introduction is well written as well the conclusion. Your stance is clear plus all the main ideas included. But maybe you can take note on these particular things:

1. “School teachers also reported that there was a major difference when they banned the selling of junk foods at their school”
Maybe you can explain what the major difference is or perhaps you can put this sentence in 4th paragraph.

2. For the behavior problems cause by junk food, it seems like a repeating as u said it twice in 2nd paragraph and 4th paragraph. You may combine it together in one paragraph only.

Regarding the grammar, maybe you can reread your essay again.

Well done!!! Nice essay!!!

May 10, 2010 at 3:52 AM  
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